Paper 1. Need help. (2 Viewers)

[EinstenICEBERG]

i finished paper 1 today. but since im doing peter skrzynecki with two poems and one related.
my essay initally was 1100 words.

But on that day I did not really memorise it, and wrote it on the spot adapting to the question however i was only able to write one p.s poem and one related. so maybe around 700~800 words. and i did have to think how to answer the question to the text.

i did this in both half yearly and trials. Someone help me out.

and. i did two 150 paragraphs for each text.

So intro, 2 para for poem 1, 2 para for poem 2 and 2 para for related and conclusion. Its that too much?

 

[deswa1]

Wait sorry, what do you need help with? 1 poem is too small, you should definitely do at least two. 1100 words is fine- my essay that I wrote today was probs around 1150-1200.

 

[EinstenICEBERG]

i dont know.. when i think without memorising the essay, it takes a while to group all my techniques together and only manage to write one poem but it has two body paragraph.