SORII QUESTION URGENT PLEASE (2 Viewers)

[yourbestfriend]

Hey, for the sorii religion and peace essay, if the question is about world peace, and I write that you need inner peace to contribute to world peace, do I then need to expand on how to achieve inner peace as well, or do I just leave it at that and then talk about world peace?

 

[twilight_star24]

Hey, for the sorii religion and peace essay, if the question is about world peace, and I write that you need inner peace to contribute to world peace, do I then need to expand on how to achieve inner peace as well, or do I just leave it at that and then talk about world peace?

depends on the Q, if the question is eg 'inner peace is necessary for world peace' then u would go in depth on inner, but if the question is just world peace, then u don't need to expand too much