Hey Guys.
I've got an assignment from Ancient History which in the perspective of one of the characters, I am to retell the story. In this case I did it in the perspective of Paris.
Some feedback would be most appreciated.
http://community.boredofstudies.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=13500&stc=1&d=1155643267
Don't flame me, I'm not a novelist
Many thanks,
Dukus.
I've got an assignment from Ancient History which in the perspective of one of the characters, I am to retell the story. In this case I did it in the perspective of Paris.
Some feedback would be most appreciated.
http://community.boredofstudies.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=13500&stc=1&d=1155643267
Don't flame me, I'm not a novelist
Many thanks,
Dukus.