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Hey, for the english response I tried to throw in as many metaphors,similes,personification,ect as well as many big words I know.
IMO, I think i did a good job at it, although while tying to use big words and language techniques, i realized that my story has little to no point to it.
I picked the stop watch, I said it was a pocket watch though.
I basically wrote about an old man bitching about how old he is.. I threw in some grandkids, but still the only thing close to a problem is that he is upset that he's old.
Did I fudge up my extended response?
IMO, I think i did a good job at it, although while tying to use big words and language techniques, i realized that my story has little to no point to it.
I picked the stop watch, I said it was a pocket watch though.
I basically wrote about an old man bitching about how old he is.. I threw in some grandkids, but still the only thing close to a problem is that he is upset that he's old.
Did I fudge up my extended response?