techqniue for these two quotes (1 Viewer)

[Alx2]

At school I'm Aussie-blonde Jamie - one of the crowd. I should win an Oscar for my acting skills. But I can't keep it up for much longer.

So far, I’ve figured that dyeing my hair blonde, poking my eyes with contact lenses, and living a lie at school all guarantee me a share in the Australian property market.

technqiues for these ? thanks

 

[starshine02]

cumulative listing in "dying hair blond..." etc and i think exaggeration in "i should win an oscar"

 

[Alx2]

oh kk thankyou ,,
for exaggeration can i say hyperbole ?

 

[starshine02]

Yeah you can

 

[jamesischool]

alliteration in 'living a lie'?

 

[wilsondw]

"I'm Aussie-blonde Jamie - one of the crowd"....im guessing this may be caesura

Also I reckon theres truncated sentences in the first quote

 

[Absolutezero]

"I'm Aussie-blonde Jamie - one of the crowd"....im guessing this may be caesura

Also I reckon theres truncated sentences in the first quote

Wouldn't it have to have the || markings to be caesura?

 

[Alx2]

ahh kk thanks all.
one last lol wb this ?

"And my Jamilah? All she does is watch this OP or OC rubbish programme, or whatever it is called, and dye her hair yellow." i cudnt possibly find any techqniue for that

 

[starshine02]

ahh kk thanks all.
one last lol wb this ?

"And my Jamilah? All she does is watch this OP or OC rubbish programme, or whatever it is called, and dye her hair yellow." i cudnt possibly find any techqniue for that

Rhetorical question? And it could be imagery from the "dye her hair yellow" part.

 

[Alx2]

okay thanks