mod a structure (2 Viewers)

[mvrcuriee]

i was finalising my structure for my tempest/hagseed essay and im in a bit of a pickle

i wanted to discuss resonances & dissonance as seperate paragraphs via integrating 2 shakespeare & 2 atwood quotes to obv prove but idk how effective this is.. or if i should do one para for each book ???? but that seems so BAD LOL
i didnt have english trials so.. im a bit COOKED
any advice would be nice...

 

[Masaken]

i was finalising my structure for my tempest/hagseed essay and im in a bit of a pickle

i wanted to discuss resonances & dissonance as seperate paragraphs via integrating 2 shakespeare & 2 atwood quotes to obv prove but idk how effective this is.. or if i should do one para for each book ???? but that seems so BAD LOL
i didnt have english trials so.. im a bit COOKED
any advice would be nice...

why didn't you have english trials?

also i did a 4 paragraph structure, it's more effective if you want to discuss the textual conversation on a broader scale (integrated is more for side-to-side details imo) and easier to set up than integrated one. my first two paragraphs were about a resonance (paragraph 1 is about text 1, para 2 about text 2) and the second two were about a dissonance (same structure). granted they have to be a bit shorter to make up for it but the tempest paras have to be short anyway as ur just establishing the idea that is being engaged with by hag-seed

2 chunky paragraphs is fine if ur pressed for time but i would recommend an integrated or a 4-para structure, 2 chunky paras feels like more chance for u to lose marks

 

[mvrcuriee]

why didn't you have english trials?

also i did a 4 paragraph structure, it's more effective if you want to discuss the textual conversation on a broader scale (integrated is more for side-to-side details imo) and easier to set up than integrated one. my first two paragraphs were about a resonance (paragraph 1 is about text 1, para 2 about text 2) and the second two were about a dissonance (same structure). granted they have to be a bit shorter to make up for it but the tempest paras have to be short anyway as ur just establishing the idea that is being engaged with by hag-seed

2 chunky paragraphs is fine if ur pressed for time but i would recommend an integrated or a 4-para structure, 2 chunky paras feels like more chance for u to lose marks

Thank you Masaken!! Yeah I had good quotes gathered but I felt like I couldn’t touch my bases with just 2
My school is weird… hasn’t done them in a while but conveniently they’re thinking of doing it with the 25s now..