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  • i've decided im not going to use that creative i wrote. i'm going to wing it in the exam and write about a macho military guy missing home :p

    Haven't written it yet, and I don't intend to. Trying to cram my belonging essay D:
    far from it mate, i just realised i cannot last 3 hours LOL
    expecting several rank1's from you
    Yeah Deswa, I got 72/73 for 2U Maths and 50 (possibly 51)/58 for 3U Maths if you were wondering or don't know yet. Fuqed up 3U really bad in terms of silly mistakes.
    Oh ok, I can't visualise it exactly. What do you mean cut it twice? I'm kinda confused. How can it cut it twice when it's a straight line? Or by twice, you mean 2 different x-coordinates?
    DESWA, MOITE, I ANSWERED THE POSSIBLE ESSAY QUESTION U PUT UP, ASSESS MOI ANSWER PLEASE. ABOUT DIFFERENT ECO. SYSTEMS ADDRESSING THE ECO. PROBLEM. cheers.
    40?! That's a crapload. WOW. Girra doesn't even offer Standard... and only 5 doing EE2 and 30 EE1. We have 140 in the grade. Around 55 do EE1 and 15 do EE2.

    How did you think about the last storyline I just posted?
    Oh wow, do you guys have Standard English? How many do Advanced, EE1, EE2?

    And BTW, another story I wrote in year 10 that can possibly relate to your concept is of a young girl, who moves to the "urban wilderness" of the city, and leaves her rural life. She is astounded by the hustle and bustle, the increased levels of crime, the amount of money-greedy people, and eventually witnesses a murder which transpires as a result of this. She basically feels like her innocence has been lost and that she doesn't belong anymore. That kind of thing might be useful.
    Sure, that'd be great. And hey, if you managed to come 4th at a top 25 selective school last year, you couldn't have completely flunked your creative writing section. And creative writing isn't a skill that you lose within a year. So sure, if the story transpires as well as you would like it, I wouldn't mind a read of it. :)
    Aha, well thanks a lot, I especially suggested it, since it might be relevant to people in your workplace in a few years (given that you enter Comm or Law).
    Genuinely, or you're just being nice? Since your feedback will help me anyway for my Yr 12 Creative.
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