I cant really help unless I see one of your essays.
So if you'd like, if you post one or something, I could pull it apart for you.
I'm doing crime writing now as well and have scored well in all my essays.
Yeah I've heard that heaps of females do the course.
I was wondering how much of the course is based on science sort of subjects, as opposed to the linguistics and other stuff. I suppose it's hard for you to know if you're only in your first semester.
It's just that I dropped biology at the...
Hmmm yes very nice trailer trash dress.
Yeah I like those two dresses... very pretty. I like the bottom one especially...
but I really want nice lace on mine....
They're expensive though.
It may seem a little sad to fantasise when I'm only 17... but I have found my PERFECT wedding dress.
http://www.instyle.co.uk/sites/default/files/imagecache/width_390/Ceres.jpg
Any one else?
After reading the first three words in another thread, I wanted to read more!
Post your first three sentences of your major work, with or without quotes.
I'm very interested!
Here are mine:
"Why were we here?! Hadn’t these people ever seen blonde hair?! Why couldn’t my family be more...
Actually, no you are totally wrong.
I hate pop, britney spears and lindsay lohan.
My music tastes are a little more refined.
I like The Who, David Bowie, the Beatles, Arcade Fire, The Killers etc.
so, totally wrong.
I think that we are the closest we have ever been to getting a female prime minister, with Julia Gillard being deputy PM. I do think that gender bias remains in Australia in some areas, particularly politics. Many conservative people in Australia think of it as a 'man's game'. Although I agree...
Hmm. I think you need to make the idea stronger and perhaps a little less... cliche? No offence but a lot of people do teenage angst style poetry. But if you're passionate about it... and are really, really good at poetry you ight just get away with it.
But perhaps you should make it really...
Wow, Jess39. Your short story is really good!
I have only just started my series of short stories - such a long task ahead of me...
I would be really interested to know what you get for it eventually.
It is so good!