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Oh ok. :) I think the main thing was showing not telling but my teacher has given me creative sentence structures. Here is one that you can use: (Adjective) ______________, (adjective)__________________,I (verbal phrase)______________. Example: Scared and cold, I slowly made my way...

Ohhhh ok.

Yep. Also, asking feedback from your teacher is always good. Also, @mmmm have you done your trials yet. If you haven't its good to get feedback and show dedication towards your teacher since they are most likely marking it . If you know what I mean :)

I meant what was the story about. I could not grasp the idea. It was just a bunch of visual descriptions but it wasn't alluding to anything. To allow the reader to understand the story you need to focus on a specific human experience. We both do standard English and I think they expect us to...

Colour coded - places where you could show don't tell more Other tips (sorry to sound harsh but I rather give you honest feedback so you can further improve) :) - Show don't tell - Flashback needed - two one taking you back into the past and one bringing you back into the present - Motif needed...

I know it's in the syllabus but like I rarely see it appear in the HSC exams. :)

Does international crime get assessed for the crime section of Legal studies?

Actually, I know thats why I said "however". There are many year 11 people on here (including you) so I thought mentioning "year 11" will ease a little stress and prevent people from making the same mistake once the hit year 12.

Well since you're in year 11 your trials are basically a practice - It doesn't mean anything. However, in year 12 it does so be careful. :)

I know that for my English trials - Module c it is going to be a narrative. @vinlatte said that theirs was a narrative. Possibly @popjin yours would be a narrative. :)

Tips: Do not panic. Breathe. :) Tee tables like @Velocifire had mentioned - useful because you don't know what question is going to be asked and tee tables will allow you to adapt more effectively in your thesis when trying to answer the question. Make sure you answer the question because some...

Check this out: https://boredofstudies.org/threads/maths-practice-papers-new-syllabus.389146/

Idk. Did the syllabus change? :)

https://thsconline.github.io/s/

Oh yeah I'm going Western for sure :)

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Pre good :) hbu