Analyse My Speech (1 Viewer)

[bored.of.u]

Hey guys im doing this speech about the concept of the outsider. I've written a speech but its not really good. I would like u guys to analyse it and make suggestions. If you would like a copy just pm me with your email and i will send it to you. Thanx in advance =D

 

[dontdodrugs]

hey if u need a quick analyse my email is sexualwarrior@hotmail.com. feel free to add me aswell!