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jazzythezoo

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Hey there,

I went to an english extension 2 conference late last year and it was strongly suggested we give our pieces to around 20 different people to edit, look over, suggest anything to improve the story, give constructive criticism (without being too harsh) and also pointing out any good points we should further develop.

Im writing a short story based on a George Michael album and each chapter reflects a song. Its a love story about an older guy with a younger girl, however there is a power struggle, and she feels more experienced and somewhat maternal towards him, while he attains a naivety.

It's based on a personal experience and I would really appreciate anyone who would volunteer to look over my work closely over the next two weeks.

PM if your interesed :)
x
 

alcalder

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Hi Jazzy,

I would be pleased to review and critique. And that goes for anyone who wants. I'll PM you as well.
 

Shadowdude

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Give it to friends - even better if they're EX2 students as well. Have a circle of reading, you read theirs - they read yours.
 

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