• Best of luck to the class of 2024 for their HSC exams. You got this!
    Let us know your thoughts on the HSC exams here
  • YOU can help the next generation of students in the community!
    Share your trial papers and notes on our Notes & Resources page
MedVision ad

Belonging Essay Help (1 Viewer)

cmiranda5151

New Member
Joined
Dec 29, 2008
Messages
16
Gender
Female
HSC
2007
I Have completed an essay on the concept of belonging with reference to Three related texts, I am trying to limit the use of words as much as possible and I need help with doing so.
One of my related texts is "Gattaca" By Andrew Niccol, I need to know what scenes the examples I have used are from, (e.g Scene 5)

The examples are;

1) [FONT=&quot]when Vincent's genetically engineered brother Anton Freeman is brought into the world, “a son my father considered worthy of his name”. (where Vincent erases his marked name and measurements that his father jots down every now and then)
[/FONT]
2)
[FONT=&quot]the scene in which Vincent and his parents are [/FONT][FONT=&quot]being assisted out of a pre-school [/FONT]
(his mother had a tendency of over reacting to every skinned knee and common cold.)
(The viewers witness a Close-up Shot of a gate being shut in Vincent’s face as he reaches out and grabs it.)


What are these scenes? (Scene ?)
Additionally, what are the techniques in these Scenes? Thank You :)
[FONT=&quot][/FONT][FONT=&quot][/FONT][FONT=&quot][/FONT]
 

Aerath

Retired
Joined
May 10, 2007
Messages
10,169
Gender
Undisclosed
HSC
N/A
The scene where they're both swimming is a fairly good one.

You need to put more thought into your scenes in both your core texts (The Crucible), and your related texts. From your posts here, it seems that you cannot be bothered, and you just haven't put enough time or effort into developing ideas/thoughts.
 

cmiranda5151

New Member
Joined
Dec 29, 2008
Messages
16
Gender
Female
HSC
2007
Actually that is only a small faction of what I have spoken about within my core texts, I have completed my essay, though I am willing to see others opinions/information on those examples :)
 

Users Who Are Viewing This Thread (Users: 0, Guests: 1)

Top