BOS Showcase: 2007 Major Works (3 Viewers)

[Amez...]

Well done holden4ever i love ur concept. as a fellow poet i am impressed. love the metaphor good job u should be proud

 

[Amez...]

Well done holden4ever i love ur concept. as a fellow poet i am impressed. love the metaphor good job u should be proud

 

[FridayEvening]

Re: BoS 2007 Major Works - Post Here.

Title:""Method or Madness? A Deconstruction of Black Metal Through Lyrical Interpretation."

Dude, you did your MW on black metal? That is unspeakably awesome.

Or unspeakably krieg, either one will do.

 

[WTF!bbq]

I've downloaded and had a quick squiz (do people still say that?) of the ones already posted, and they seem uber coolies, can't wait to have a proper read after trials are done. You guys really know what you're on about and I quite liked City Of Dreams, never heard of gonzo journalism but I likey ^____^

Not posting mine until there's enough talk going on in here to drown it out >_< I knew it was pretty dodgy but in the light of these, it's like... craptastic

Zomg people post more works!!!!

Dude, you did your MW on black metal? That is unspeakably awesome.

^ qft

 

[kewlu]

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Dude, you did your MW on black metal? That is unspeakably awesome.

Or unspeakably krieg, either one will do.

^ qft

Awwww, thanks guys.

You may also find that my Major Work embodies 'grimness', 'kvlt', 'true' and 'necro' at the same time.

 

[kewlu]

Re: BoS 2007 Major Works - Post Here.

Jim, what's with the secret Wikipedia links in your work?

 

[RiCkiE]

Alright my work is here...erm...where's that damn attach button?

oh there it is...be gentle!

Title: He's Leaving Home EDIT: It's actually "He's Coming Home" - Oops.
Medium: Short Story

 

[arwin90]

Here's mine...it's a short story called Litchi. Read away. It's about ants

Everyone else's looks really good. I'm on first page city of dreams, it reminds me of the movie city of god, it's also about a journalist

 

[RiCkiE]

Somebody's a Stephen King fan

Holy crap I just realized how arrogant my reflection statement sounds. Fuck!

 

[kewlu]

I want to read another critical.

 

[ChicShit]

Okay this wasn't the final final copy so there are still a few minor errors, but here it is anyway. Oh and had trouble attaching it here, so uploaded it to a file sharing site. Écouter!

Title: The Anatomy Of Madness
Medium: Short Story
Reflection Statement: Here

 

[kewlu]

Hey rick
sorry i've only briefly skimmed the beginning of ur work but i noticed that you put your school there... i hope you remembered to cross it out before u handed it up or that it was part of the story..

now i shall read it i will upload mine soon

Yeah, I read some of his reflection and thought the same thing..

Now hurry up cutie. I've been waiting a while for yours.

 

[kewlu]

Sam i thought we agreed we'd wait till marriage.

Well.... I'll show you mine if you show me yours.

 

[idling fire]

Re: BoS 2007 Major Works - Post Here.

You won't post yours.

A quite accurate summation of my intentions. Well... see... I wouldn't mind posting it... but my confidence is shot to hell at the moment - and that's before reading anyone's work!

 

[kewlu]

Here they are..


:S!
Every possible cliche attempted, and packed into 6000 words.
&hearts;

Omg it's up! And so is something else.

I meant to put mine in PDF too. Ergh. :/

 

[blackall46]

Re: BoS 2007 Major Works - Post Here.

SHIT. He beat me to it.

Well here we go:

Be warned though, there are some rather vulgar lyrical themes here.

Title:""Method or Madness? A Deconstruction of Black Metal Through Lyrical Interpretation."
Medium: Critical Response.

I had a look at this. Damn good and pretty interesting. That and the city of dreams one I had a pretty good look at.

I just don't want to read a down-to-earth story; we've all seen angsty teen dramas again and again.

And kewlu, its a bit odd that you censored cunt and shit and fuck.
1) Teachers are lefties and don't care about conservative values too much
2) Teachers put up with it on a daily basis
3) It's obvious what the word is, and you wussed it.

 

[princy]

Okay, here we go:

Title: Do Ants Have Feelings?
Medium: Short Story

NOTES:

• In the early pages, there is a picture of a door. The door is coloured in in red crayon "the sickly red of childhood crayons".
• Further on in the story, there are a series of shapes made up of dotted lines. In the final copy, these are half drawn in with black felt tip pen.
• The page after this is a full page outline of an apple with the word 'red' underneath it. It is coloured in, messily but still inside the lines in red crayon in the final copy.

 

[kewlu]

Re: BoS 2007 Major Works - Post Here.

I had a look at this. Damn good and pretty interesting. That and the city of dreams one I had a pretty good look at.

I just don't want to read a down-to-earth story; we've all seen angsty teen dramas again and again.

And kewlu, its a bit odd that you censored cunt and shit and fuck.
1) Teachers are lefties and don't care about conservative values too much
2) Teachers put up with it on a daily basis
3) It's obvious what the word is, and you wussed it.

OMG, a compliment. Thanks a lot.

The story behind my censoring...

I originally wanted to have it uncensored to allow for the full impact of the lyrics, but I got argued out of it (and trust me, this is a very hard thing to acheive) by my teacher and my head teacher. If I had my way, I would have had it in there.

I did back it up fairly well and bullshit it in my RS though, imo.

 

[lm4eb]

'The Glass Jar'- short story (ihearte)

 

[kewlu]

'The Glass Jar'- short story (ihearte)

Hey Gwen.