Can I both agree & disagree in an essay? (1 Viewer)

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Or is this regarded as "sitting on the fence" & I have to pick a defenite stance? Because I think one of my related texts differs in some areas to my prescribed text and I was wondering if I could just say 'Text 1 argues that...HOWEVER, text 2 represents this notion as bad...' etc
 

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that is perfectly fine, and may even demonstrate your broader scope of analysis, as long as you do not contradict yourself.
 

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Yes, my thesis was exactly something along those lines.

Just formulate a thesis that allows you to reflect both sides for eg. Text 1 portrays how a sense of belonging will have a positive effect on individuals while Tex 2 illustrates how a lack of belonging is negative.
 

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There's nothing wrong with arguing both sides.
 

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it depends if its supposed to be an opinionative piece or argumentative piece its ok its its just a factual piece, talk to your teacher...is it an essey or thesis?

generally if you provide arguments from both sides you either agree to one or the other to a minor extent
 
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i never provided conflicting views and when i did back in year 11 and early year 12, i had comments about it and didnt get as much marks.
thanks 2009'ers!
 

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You can present both sides of the argument, but you have to make a conclusive statement about what that SAYS! What does it SAY about belonging if there are two different sides. You need to use the texts to support your argument
 

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