Can you guys check if my belonging essay structure is valid for adv eng. (1 Viewer)

[sghguos]

Intro - 77 words
Core text paragraph one - 210 words
Core text paragraph two - 210 words
Related text paragraph - 285 words
Conclusion- 50 words


Please tell me it's valid. I'm panicking. Some people say why the heck do you have 1 paragraph for related.

 

[Absolutezero]

It's fine. Core Text, Related, Core Text may work better though.

 

[Danstar2]

I thought prescribed and related was to be a 1:1 ratio.

 

[Absolutezero]

It doesn't have to be. Especially if your core text is a set of poems.

However, it often is better to have the ratio equal. It's not mandatory though.