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Concluding sentence which links back to your thesis (1 Viewer)

feedmemore

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So how do you guys develop a concluding sentence which links back to your thesis. Can you show me an example please?

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So if I get the question: "Humanity strives for a sense of belonging", then I would say something like-

"Hence the above texts reflect humanity's intrinsic desire to belong, reinforcing the notion that (thesis)." Then briefly summarise your paragraphs in 2-3 sentences. If in doubt during the HSC you forget your conclusion, you can always restate your introduction and change some words so it's not identical.

Obviously this isn't exactly what I would write but I made this up one 2 seconds so it's not perfect. Hopefully this gives you an idea of what to write though :)
 

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