Could someone please give me feedback for my SOR 2 essay (1 Viewer)

[moonsuyoung]

Hi!
I was wondering if there is anybody who could give me feedback for my SOR essay for free? It is on Islam!

 

[popsmokeswife]

Hi!
I was wondering if there is anybody who could give me feedback for my SOR essay for free? It is on Islam!

Sure, ill take a look

 

[moonsuyoung]

Sure, ill take a look

Thank you so much!! I'll send it to you after I finish

 

[moonsuyoung]

I didn't do Islam but I can try and give it a shot : )

TYSM! I'll send it to you as well once I finished! I've got a paragraph left