croucher131
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- 2008
My original story was the bomb.
The opening was describing this chick lying in a bathtub drowning in a freezer with her arms swinging on butchers hooks in a freezer room.
Then I got told not to cause of the graphic descriptive language. I was disappointed cause that was a technique in itself the descriptive language
The opening was describing this chick lying in a bathtub drowning in a freezer with her arms swinging on butchers hooks in a freezer room.
Then I got told not to cause of the graphic descriptive language. I was disappointed cause that was a technique in itself the descriptive language