Creative writing.. Your thoughts please (1 Viewer)

[<Stretch>]

This is a piece i just plucked out of thin air. Could you please tell me what you think or if it could be taken anywhere.

Thanks in advance.

 

[DigitalFortress]

hey, I really enjoyed that. If you can produce that in an exam with a question which agrees with the story your going to do really well.

 

[pRiNCesS..!!]

yeah i thought that was pretty good too!im guessing your doing innner journeys which i am also doing..just one question for you though, without being critisising..but can it be that short?coz that was really good but staright to the point as well..

 

[<Stretch>]

thanks a lot for the encouraging words digitalfortress. Im a pretty crap writer getting 9-10/15 usually but i guess i though about the concept of journeys more for this one.