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Tofuu

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Can someone help me improve my really c*** essay?

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thanks in advance
 

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There you go.

Your essay wasn't too bad, but you had a few grammatical mistakes which I hence edited.

P.S. If this is a film review, then I advise you to insert the year of the film. Also, give a rating out of 10 at the end.

If it is an essay, then I again advise you to insert the year of the film, and however, disregard the rating.

I've never seen this film - it sounds strange! =)

Goodluck!



thanks a bunch :kiss:
 
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