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[fandagles_029]

hiii, if anyone could provide feedback on my mod a essay [the tempest and hagseed] i would be super grateful, i got a 16/20 for it on the internal assessment and i would like to aim higher lol [18/19 maybe 20 if possible]

 

[literaturelover123]

Hi if you'd like, I can give u feedback

 

[fandagles_029]

Hi if you'd like, I can give u feedback

hii, thank you so much!! i've attached a copy of my essay