First Three Words of your MW (Just 'Cause) (2 Viewers)

'mogen

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I'm just a bit behind...
I like this thread- very interesting. =]

My first three words are a sentence.
"His eyes burn."
 

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either

'There is a ...' [dead spot in the night]

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'She watched me' [With yellow eyes, she watched me.]


without the rest of it, it seems really lame!!
 

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either

'There is a ...' [dead spot in the night]

or

'She watched me' [With yellow eyes, she watched me.]


without the rest of it, it seems really lame!!
I'm in year 10, but I have started a short story which may very well end up as a major work. :)

The first three words are, "Mamma strode gallantly" (across the room, staring at me, her angry eyes a sign of the imminent eruption). After that - "Federico, get over here!" she snapped at me.
I like it, myself, arrogance yes. :)
 

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Quote starting: "Why is it"
And my start which will probably get changed before long: "The light was"

I've written three parts of mine and now it's like... hmm. Where to now?
 

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Yeah I know what you mean...
It's hard to really get stuck in there and start knuckling out the details.
I like looking at it from here...
I don't want this year to progress! =[ I wish time would stop. STOPSTOP!
 

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Yeah, just make the Extension 2 year stop so we can have more time! I just sat blankly today doing NOTHING. Grr.
 

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I carry my journal with me to school every day, its easy because its so light anyway. Just jotting down things as they come to me so I can go back over ideas which I thought of but never really gave much credit to.

Also, wide reading of both fiction and non fiction and previous MW's.
 

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I carry my journal with me to school every day, its easy because its so light anyway. Just jotting down things as they come to me so I can go back over ideas which I thought of but never really gave much credit to.

Also, wide reading of both fiction and non fiction and previous MW's.
Fair enough. If I was you though, I would make sure I still got time to rest, eat and drink of course. :)
 

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Fair enough. If I was you though, I would make sure I still got time to rest, eat and drink of course. :)
I rest, eat and drink for >99% of my non-school day :p

14 free periods a week ensures I have enough time to get homework and study done for the moment :)
 

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14 FREE???
Holy moly
how long are your lessons?

i have 8.
and ours are 50 minutes.
although thats over 7 days not 5.
but still
14!!
 

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~40 minutes, mine is over 5 days only. Shiteload of extensions (well, only 3, but still) which means I get to school at 8 every morning without fail.

Meh, doesn't matter. I'm having fun at school for the first time in ages.
 

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"The Sun Beat..." Of course, it'll probably change. It already has about 12 times...
 

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Clasping desperately; his hands began to slip as did his lifeforce

yeeh it's random...and its more then 3 words...
but you get the picture :haha:
 

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"'Dont't you see we're being fucked over?" said the balding man in the too shiny suit.

yeah, i cant end halfway inside direct speech.
 

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"In the time"

wow. brilliant start isn't it? :mad1:
eh. at least the markers are reading through our whole major work.
never thought i'd say that.
 

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