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Hey all!
I have an English assessment coming up in 2 days and I am feeling screwed

Im doing unseen short answers on Dobson's poems and was wondering if anyone would have any exemplar paragraphs that they would be willing to share.

Thanks all and good luck studying!

 

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And was wondering would anyone be willing to give me general feedback on how I can improve my paragraphs so far? All good if not possible