I really stuffed my english essays! can anyone help me? (1 Viewer)

[girlworld_club]

I honestly don't know where i went wrong, and teachers give little to no feedback. could anyone read through my essay (which is handwritten) and tell me where i can improve. Thanks

 

[deswa1]

Yeah I can have a quick look- I don't have too much time but I should be able to do it sometime tomorrow or Saturday or something. I'll PM you my email

 

[girlworld_club]

Thanks, i'll send it to you later. My printer has decided to have a seizure on me.