hi, I got a in class essay about inner journeys in english.
The question is:
How does your core text explore the concept of inner journeys?
Just wondering, would it be okay to include the "journey" of the responder- ie how the text challenges the responder and makes them change their values etc. The teacher recommended that I shouldn't do it(and do a boring concept such as perseverance, and survival), but didn't give me a reason for i. Maybe I'm misunderstanding the idea of a 'concept'.
Any advice?
The question is:
How does your core text explore the concept of inner journeys?
Just wondering, would it be okay to include the "journey" of the responder- ie how the text challenges the responder and makes them change their values etc. The teacher recommended that I shouldn't do it(and do a boring concept such as perseverance, and survival), but didn't give me a reason for i. Maybe I'm misunderstanding the idea of a 'concept'.
Any advice?
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