is it okay to do 2 long body paras for mod A (comparative) ? (1 Viewer)

[uniqueusername1]

i meant would u do the first 2 paras separated and then the last one integrated

na don't do that lol. Keep it separated throughout or integrated throughout.

 

[zizi2003_]

i meant would u do the first 2 paras separated and then the last one integrated

ohh ya idg how the 3rd body para could integrate 2 wholly different ideas to compare both texts tho...

 

[uniqueusername1]

So if I were you i'd try and do 4 separated paras.

 

[vishnay]

yea honestly i prefer seperate (4 paras). But the topic sentences and links add a-lot of words lol. Better to do 2 integrated. Plus it sounds better as your actively analysing.

i like reading integrated personally

too hard for me tho

 

[uniqueusername1]

i like reading integrated personally

too hard for me tho

Yea fair enough.

 

[zizi2003_]

yea honestly i prefer seperate (4 paras). But the topic sentences and links add a-lot of words lol. Better to do 2 integrated. Plus it sounds better as your actively analysing.

so when you do the 2 body para approach, do you have like one example from ur first text, followed by an example from ur second text - and so on? or is it first 2 examples from first text only

 

[uniqueusername1]

You can still band 6 with separated anyways.

 

[uniqueusername1]

so when you do the 2 body para approach, do you have like one example from ur first text, followed by an example from ur second text - and so on? or is it first 2 examples from first text only

so like first I compare the contexts. Then I do text A quote followed by text B quote -> comparing these two. And then repeat. Don't do text A for 2 quotes followed by text B quotes. That destroys the whole purpose of integrated approach.

 

[vishnay]

You can still band 6 with separated anyways.

u can state rank with separated

 

[vishnay]

na don't do that lol. Keep it separated throughout or integrated throughout.

obviously

i was just confused as to how op was gonna do 3 paras in a mod a essay

 

[zizi2003_]

so like first I compare the contexts. Then I do text A quote followed by text B quote -> comparing these two. And then repeat. Don't do text A for 2 quotes followed by text B quotes. That destroys the whole purpose of integrated approach.

ok then im screwed ig
ive always done 2 Text A quotes followed by 2 text B quotes (and comparison is done in text B quotes)
but ur right tho, i should probs change that now

 

[uniqueusername1]

u can state rank with separated

you can bro. But my essay is a whole lot longer with 4 paras than 2 lol. You don't even notice it but the topic sentences and links add like an extra 100-150 words.

 

[uniqueusername1]

ok then im screwed ig
ive always done 2 Text A quotes followed by 2 text B quotes (and comparison is done in text B quotes)
but ur right tho, i should probs change that now

yea cause the whole point of integrated approach is to let you actively compare.

 

[zizi2003_]

obviously

i was just confused as to how op was gonna do 3 paras in a mod a essay

lol who said i was doing 3
i was asking if 2 integrated body paras are allowed
it's either 2 or 4

edit: WHOOPS i meant to write 4 in the og post, not 3

 

[vishnay]

lol who said i was doing 3
i was asking if 2 integrated body paras are allowed
it's either 2 or 4

edit: WHOOPS i meant to write 4 in the og post, not 3

ohhh that clears it up lmao