Last Line of your Major Work? (1 Viewer)

beve

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"As seventy six believers died for their faith in the Easter Riots of 2009, the essence of God in our hearts and souls, too, passed away."
 

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But still the old tales lingered, and crossed the seas – that of wolf-wearers and demons lurking in the night.


So gay.
 

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"From inside the house, I hear the strains of Crowded House - I smile, and push the dirt around the plant snugly."
 
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thekoolkyogre

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" [FONT=&quot]I look up toward the horizon, straining my neck slightly. My new life awaits me."

The last line sounds so optimistic =O but it's actually really depressing when placed in context.
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"... and then he woke up and realised that it was all just a dream."

Nah, I don't do Extension 2 but imagine if someone did write that.
 

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"That's all there is, there isn' anymore."

Does this sound familiar to anyone? From what show/book this is from? Hint: Think children's genre.
 

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The word is also Amen, but pronounced as A-meen, not 'men' as in English. Furthermore, if you don't know the very basics of a religion, why are you writing about it?

T_T i researched Islam heavily, and i knew Amen was Ameen, but I wasn't sure if they used that to conclude prayers like Christians do or not, cos the Salah tutorials i watched finished with Als salaam Alaykum
 

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"Not that it matters now…
But the cliffs on the beach fell that night."

Very significant image that sounds ridiculous out of context :p
 

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"She turned around, and Drew was greeted with the most beautiful sight in the world (at least to him, others would say their partners looked better doing this thing I am about to tell you, but to Drew, that was just natural bias, or of course pandering to their partners): her smile".

Awesome sentence, imo.
 

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"Because I remember when the sky was blue."
 

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