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Shadowdude

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Oh no, it seems like we have another batch of the dreary, postmodern, nihilistic Extension 2 English works...
 

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Still haven't finished a draft or something?
Well...I did a draft and then decided to just rewrite it (same story and stuff) because i wasn't too happy with just editing the draft. Just wondering, how big is your journal? And everyone else's?
 

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Well...I did a draft and then decided to just rewrite it (same story and stuff) because i wasn't too happy with just editing the draft. Just wondering, how big is your journal? And everyone else's?
My journal was an entire big folder, plus a quarter of an arts book thing.
 

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My journal was an entire big folder, plus a quarter of an arts book thing.
Like those binder folders? Wow, well done. Mine isn't anywhere close haha hope it doesn't affect the marks :S
 

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But it was 90% filled with past drafts.
You better get above 45 then, or I will personally write a letter to the Board! That's amazing man, you've inspired me to feed my folder a bit more.
 

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Uhh, I did Extension 2 last year and I did get over 45. (re-read my sig, it says 2010 HSC, not 2011!)
 

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Well, now I wish I had thought of a binder folder. My journal is the conventional sketch/art book; and, when I handed it in, it seemed fit to burst with all the past drafts I had stapled inside it.

Last line: "the sky shattered and reformed in whitecaps above her, as she rested on the cool sand."

Other last line: "Well, which is?"
 

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I flung off the drape, “I call this istoria: A Girl at the Folies Bergere.”

I hate my life so much right now D: gonna chuck an all-nighter and do reflection statement
 

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“Oh yes, of course. Pardon my ill manners. You can call me… Beelzebub.”
 

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The last line of my epilogue is 'Smiling, she turns and walks back into the gallery; back into her home.'
The last sentence of the main story is 'I know my name.'
 

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