Looking for someone to read and criticise my discursive (1 Viewer)

[rapport1]

Please feel free to tear my discursive apart; I would love to receive some critical feedback.

Comment if you are willing to provide feedback.

I will dm my discursive.

 

[rapport1]

Feel free to give critical feedback (I'd love some)

Comment if you'd be happy to do so; I'll dm my piece to you.

 

[aqwerty13402]

what level of eng?

 

[rapport1]

what level of eng?

adv

 

[aqwerty13402]

adv

yeah send it over

 

[katiekms]

Feel free to give critical feedback (I'd love some)

Comment if you'd be happy to do so; I'll dm my piece to you.

could you dm it to me as well?