Dream-Big
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hi my name is joey. i'm doing mechencial engineering at the University of techonology sydney and i'm first year. I really like this girl but I think she doesn't like me. i'm sad for this. that's why i will write her a poem, but i didn't do 4unit english, only standard english with a mark of band 2.
Love poem -
your eyes are wide closed
when my eyes are opened
why is this?
Is the your world not good for me
Or thy shall be no more?
CAPS! Ha! I suprised you!
For making this a sad moment for the
and shall my world not be with you
i will find another soul mate
and shall be greater than the
and i found the just now
and until and thy, i will find love
with thy,
Do you like my poem? sorry for the grammar and spelling, i don't like english but writing a poem might help her like me again..
I try to use words from shakespeare which makes it look smarted
thanks.name is joey
Love poem -
your eyes are wide closed
when my eyes are opened
why is this?
Is the your world not good for me
Or thy shall be no more?
CAPS! Ha! I suprised you!
For making this a sad moment for the
and shall my world not be with you
i will find another soul mate
and shall be greater than the
and i found the just now
and until and thy, i will find love
with thy,
Do you like my poem? sorry for the grammar and spelling, i don't like english but writing a poem might help her like me again..
I try to use words from shakespeare which makes it look smarted
thanks.name is joey