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Module C - Elective 1: Telling the Truth (2 Viewers)

genghis

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smashed it!!!!

I really got the speach of well. I did 15 pgs for it!!! :)
8 for blade runner / BNW
7 for Lear
and 15 for Frontline.
Nailed.
My most insightful comment was:

You may find that truth is alot like wool.
Wool? you ask?
It's simple. When truth is put into the Media machine it is alot like proverbial wool in a processing factory. It is cleaned, coloured and softened so as to please the public when it is pulled over our eyes. Truth and wool are very alike!

Sick 1 huh. Howd everyone else go that did truth???
Good luck for the rest of your exams.
Genghis


And throughout the day mankind played with grenades,
And during the night we raped and pillaged.

Cuz we're VIKINGS at heart.
 

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I don't get it. How do you write, like, 15 pages? Do you practice writing fast or something? I was writing the whole time and I only managed to get about 7 pages for Frontline, 9 for bnw/br and about 5 or 6 for king lear.
I only wrote about 2 episodes and 2 additional material because I didn't have time to write any more.
And I didn't like the question much. Section 1 had the only good question.
 

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I think I did the best in this, I adressed the audience, I linked it to the presentation and pretty much stuck to the required text form, was able to write 10 pages, detailed references to both my additionals.
 

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Yeah I dont write so big, as long as you get your information in, dont worry about it. 15pages of crap isnt gonna help ya, is it?
 

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da truth Q rocks! Speech was ez and a change from doin da 10p essayz~
i did round 9-10 4 dis! woot!

i did dis Q 1st n it was gr8! got my head straight in2 it!
 

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ahhh! i totally forgot about the audience! >.< (damn you audience!) i was too busy writing and didn't think about it!..stupid me....but i LOVED the question! =) it was quite predictable. Out of the whole paper i did my best in this. I was hoping for a speech and ta da! good job BOS except mod a and b >=|
 

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countdown said:
da truth Q rocks! Speech was ez and a change from doin da 10p essayz~
i did round 9-10 4 dis! woot!

i did dis Q 1st n it was gr8! got my head straight in2 it!
*smiles* I just hope you don't write in essays like you type online. ^ ^
 

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glycerine said:
my only problem was i kept writing all this stuff and then remembering 'oh shit! intended audience!' so i think it was a little all over the place :|
yeah i did the same thing
 

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i wrote

7 pages for KL
7 pages for BNW
6 Pages for Frontline
at about 11 words per line...is this good or is it crap?
 

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somborac said:
i wrote

7 pages for KL
7 pages for BNW
6 Pages for Frontline
at about 11 words per line...is this good or is it crap?
Don't fret hon, that's very good.

We all know the 6-page essays with concise content beat out the 15-page essays which blabber on about nothing.
 

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Ah I didn't really include the audience at all.... I spent waaay to much time talkin bout Frontline, but still wrote a bit on Media Watch and Bowling for Columbine. I always talk bout the one ep in Frontline, The Siege. I swear I could write an essay soley on it.
 

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WaltzinDarkness said:
Ah I didn't really include the audience at all.... I spent waaay to much time talkin bout Frontline, but still wrote a bit on Media Watch and Bowling for Columbine. I always talk bout the one ep in Frontline, The Siege. I swear I could write an essay soley on it.
I could write a whole essay about Ted Hughes' "The Shot"... or Lincoln's "Gettysburg Address". Things are good. =}

Your Stewie icon is dancing in time with my RHCP! O O. *watches, transfixed*
 

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Yea i agree with Tedanse! i know ppl who filled 2 booklets for each module!
I dunno if they're writtin a load of crap of coz they have bigg writin~
u did beta dan me somborac so dats good! kekek:)
 

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Tredanse said:
I could write a whole essay about Ted Hughes' "The Shot"... or Lincoln's "Gettysburg Address". Things are good. =}

Your Stewie icon is dancing in time with my RHCP! O O. *watches, transfixed*
Awww, and I just changed it! Pity Johnny doesn't dance :p
 

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i spent so much fricken time on lear that i only got 2 of my 3 pieces of Ad.Mat out in this Q. but i absoloutley loved it, speeches are great. sept i didnt say "visions and versions" very much, anyone else? i wrote a booklet for each question..and that was struggling. i dont think ive ever written so quickly!!
 

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so what would you say is considered "addressing the audience"? also, what did you take "young writer/directors" to mean? like, what kind of situation did you imagine? i kind of sunk into lecturing them on the responsibility of media towards the end... :S
 

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i really liked the question, i addressed the audience at the start and the finish, but not much in between i think!!!!:) oh well, it was much better than the other two sections thats for sure!!! i added in instructions for my speech, like play episode and so on, do you think thats ok????:eek:
 

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the question itself was very typical, but that diddnt stop me from screwing it up.
 

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