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professorayton8

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hi! :)

im just wondering if anyone could critique my short story about belonging?

any help would be much appreciated!
thanks :D
 
I am the Law

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'Spiritual Being' would probably love to. He is ranked 1st in English and is of upmost intelligence within this area of study.
 
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