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RAW exemplar (1 Viewer)
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GruvisMalt
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http://www.boredofstudies.org/courses/english/std/2002_English_Standard_HSC_Exemplar_Q6_S1_BOS.pdf
I wanted to bring this up anyway so ... What do you guys think of this response ? I think it's pretty weak. For Raw he mostly just re-tells the story. He describes the scenes from the book with good memory, but 90% of his Raw parts were just telling the story, then he talked a little on techniques. I remeber teachers ALWAYS saying not to re-tell the story, so why did this guy go so good ?! I don't think its a good response at all really, especially not worth of exemplar.
I wanted to bring this up anyway so ... What do you guys think of this response ? I think it's pretty weak. For Raw he mostly just re-tells the story. He describes the scenes from the book with good memory, but 90% of his Raw parts were just telling the story, then he talked a little on techniques. I remeber teachers ALWAYS saying not to re-tell the story, so why did this guy go so good ?! I don't think its a good response at all really, especially not worth of exemplar.
yeah i dont think its worth an exemplar but i just needed a guide of what the markers liked! Thanks again