Scholarship application help please (1 Viewer)

[tonysoprano]

Hey everyone,

I was wondering if anybody that is proficient in English and has some spare time on their hands are willing to read over my E12 USyd scholarship application responses to provide constructive feedback (preferably those already finished high school). It would mean a lot, because I'm unsure how my response reads at the moment.

Send me a private message if you're willing to help me out.

Thanks a heap!

 

[crispycarrot]

You shouldn't of worry, your gooder then moist.