Elisa Sweet
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- 2013
Text 1 was good, 2 was ok, 3 & 4 sucked! I couldn't find anywhere in text 4 where it showed inclusion, just exclusion.
The narrator wasn't included, but the sand people included each other. I used "Everyone lives in the dunes" (inclusive language) for one of my examples.Text 1 was good, 2 was ok, 3 & 4 sucked! I couldn't find anywhere in text 4 where it showed inclusion, just exclusion.
Calm down. The test was two days ago.Sand people. Fucking text four was about sand people and sandal discrimination.
And the teachers have the nerve to call my stories shit.
+1Calm down. The test was two days ago.