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Elisa Sweet

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Text 1 was good, 2 was ok, 3 & 4 sucked! I couldn't find anywhere in text 4 where it showed inclusion, just exclusion.
 

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Text 1 was good, 2 was ok, 3 & 4 sucked! I couldn't find anywhere in text 4 where it showed inclusion, just exclusion.
The narrator wasn't included, but the sand people included each other. I used "Everyone lives in the dunes" (inclusive language) for one of my examples.
 

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Text 1 and 2 were FINE.But Text 3 and 4? Honestly? What even was that!?
I am willing to bet that I received a maximum of 2/5 for the longer short response question - so terrible! :'(
 
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Sand people. Fucking text four was about sand people and sandal discrimination.

And the teachers have the nerve to call my stories shit.
 

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