McLovin said:
Here you go.
Rap song: RAP IS SHIT!
Verse I
Just looped this drum beat on my 20 inch Mac,
It is the talent in this genre that is clearly a lack.
I wear this hat with the front to the back.
Reppin this fucker keep it all on track.
Instruments are a thing of the past.
Our musical skills will never last.
I am the main player in this cast.
I break bones in a flash so fast.
Chorus
Took no music class
Basic knowledge of it I could not pass.
I make myself look like an ass.
My ego is impossible to surpass.
Verse II
Keep everything the same.
Interest is never our game.
The fall of music, rap is to blame.
We are the pinnacle of media shame.
No bigger morons than Zrap and Hiphophooray
Must say they are pretty gay.
They fondle each others balls yay or nay?
It is a laugh every time they have something to say.
Bridge (not that rappers use this item in their structure)
Inferior music dictated by the lowest of scum
Would rather listen to music collection owned by my mum.
When this is played on the radio I block my ears with the double thumb.
Useless genre what has this world become?
ohhhh wow, you just made a song with similar lyrics to a mainstream rap song created for the purpose of making people dance in clubs and selling records!!! wow man, awesome.
if you want to completely ignore the political content and clever social commentary/satire in alot of hip hop songs which YOU HAVENT HEARD then ok, ill give you a classic AZ verse that 'talks shit' and its still better than anything you could ever come up with
your rap, especially the chorus discloses your bias, so pretty much everything you say is irrelevant from now on and previously.
Visualizin the realism of life and actuality
Fuck who's the baddest a person's status depends on salary
And my mentality is, money orientated
I'm destined to live the dream for all my peeps who never made it
cause yeah, we were beginners in the hood as five percenters
But somethin must of got in us cause all of us turned to sinners
Now some, restin in peace and some are sittin in San Quentin
Others such as myself are tryin to carry on tradition
Keepin the schwepervesence street ghetto essence inside us
Cause it provides us with the proper insight to guide us
Even though, we know somehow we all gotta go
but as long as we leavin thievin we'll be leavin with some kind of dough
so, and to that day we expire and turn to vapors
me and my capers-ll be somewhere stackin plenty papers
Keepin it real, packin steel, gettin high
Cause life's a bitch and then you die
seriously, sam04u made an excellent point, do you fuckers really think that even though rap is embraced by many people you would probably classify as musicians and people who know alot more about music than you and me ( eg, elton john, zack de la rocha) are you really saying that you little fucks, you little stubborn wastes of air know more about music than them?