Repetition of she, I guess u could construct a statement of how she is breaking down or unstable in a way, this one is a weaker one, the conjunction of but, I have like no context of what the text might be but I'm assuming you can say how this character is reticent, and despite her hatred towards the party, she is inclined to obscure it. lmao and the author puts in the third person honestly you can just incorporate the first technique with this to elaborate on her mental state being irrational
ALSO, THERE IS A SILIBANCE OF 'S' IN SHE SO U COULD USE THAT TO EMPHASISE ON THE REPETITION OF HER BREAKING DWON LMAO IDK IDK
I see a paradox lmao but I don't think my input might be helpful, lmao please tell me if u found this helpful
