Tips on improving my essay? Rollovers (1 Viewer)

[lilcutetricker]

I worked really hard on my essay and I think I analysed it really well, so did my friends from uni and my tutor but when I submitted it the teacher said I wouldn't be suitable for EE1. Some of the people in my class started ON the day it was due and still passed. I don't have any plans on dropping EE1 so could someone check my essay and suggests some tips on improving it?

 

[strawberrye]

I would be happy to check your essay-but if you can attach the marking criteria and question it will make my comments much more specific and helpful-for English extension one, purely good analysis is not sufficient enough, you need to make sure you are answering the given question really well, otherwise if you are not answering the question and adhering to the requirements of the marking criteria-it will be hard to gain a good mark even for good analysis of text-so just send it through-I would be more than happy to help