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I feel like Hamlet, living in a world where i have to do english for my H.S.C. Should I live or do myself in?, I do not know. I have suffered the, "slings and arrows of outrageous misfortune." of having to do this transformation essay... where I have to include context, ros and guil, Hamlet and two videos which we have to directly reference! Now if I were that guy with the,"bare bodkin" I would gut myself in and out to not do this 45 minutes 15% weighting essay... I just don't know how much I can put in an essay, compacted that much and tie enough themes.

I am thinking of doing death, uncertainty and language or possible action / inaction to tie it all... Anyone know how I can plan this?
 

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brogan77 said:
With a pen and pencil.
Helpful. Really.

Now, I haven't started actually looking at the 'transformation' section of the course, so I won't be able to help much. We recently did an essay but it was a 'compare and contrast' rather then a transformation one. If you've only got 40-45 minutes, I'd concentrate on discussing:

-Context: how has society changed since Shakespeare and how has that influenced Stoppard's text (think about the World Wars, mass media, society status changes, the position of women, faith in God, justice etc.)
Two themes, three if you're a quick writer.
-Death: how it has been transformed to be tragic for the 'common man', death holds little justice, unlike in Hamlet, it is no longer tragic and romantic etc. etc.
-Illusion vs. Reality: Hamlet uses deceiving characters in a fairly certain world, RAGAD uses fairly ambiguous characters in an absurd world. Look at the way Stoppard has transformed Hamlet's world into an existential landscape with no real values, there is no God and no monarch.
-Action vs. Inaction: Hamlet decides to postpone action, but is ultimately given the choice of whether or not to act. Ros and Guil, on the other hand, are not given the choice, they are fixed on a path that was determined by Shakespeare, that neither the characters, the audience, nor Stoppard himself can change.
Two techniques, three if you're fast
-Imagery: unlike Shakespeare, Stoppard does not need imagery and description to populate his bleak world,
-Soliloquy: used in Hamlet to reveal inner workings of a character's mind, Ros and Guil are not important enough to use soliloquies, neither are they ever alone

Also look at the way your view of the original text has been transformed. Originally, when reading the parent text, Hamlet, we are positioned to see Ros and Guil as traitorous, manipulative characters who want nothing more than to impress the King and Queen. In RAGAD, Stoppard transforms them into two characters that are merely hapless pawns, easily manipulated by those around them. Consider the way you now look at the language of Shakespeare. During RAGAD, Ros and the Player often indirectly comment on the play Hamlet itself. For example, at one point Ros hears Hamlet say, "Oh, I could be bounded in a nutshell!" (or whatever the quote is) and exclaims "He's depressed! Denmark's a prison and he'd rather live in a nutshell." This enables the audience to look at Hamlet in a new light. We take some of the phrases, the characters and even the plot itself in a more light-hearted view.
 
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Sam. said:
Helpful. Really.

Now, I haven't started actually looking at the 'transformation' section of the course, so I won't be able to help much. We recently did an essay but it was a 'compare and contrast' rather then a transformation one. If you've only got 40-45 minutes, I'd concentrate on discussing:

-Context: how has society changed since Shakespeare and how has that influenced Stoppard's text (think about the World Wars, mass media, society status changes, the position of women, faith in God, justice etc.)
Two themes, three if you're a quick writer.
-Death: how it has been transformed to be tragic for the 'common man', death holds little justice, unlike in Hamlet, it is no longer tragic and romantic etc. etc.
-Illusion vs. Reality: Hamlet uses deceiving characters in a fairly certain world, RAGAD uses fairly ambiguous characters in an absurd world. Look at the way Stoppard has transformed Hamlet's world into an existential landscape with no real values, there is no God and no monarch.
-Action vs. Inaction: Hamlet decides to postpone action, but is ultimately given the choice of whether or not to act. Ros and Guil, on the other hand, are not given the choice, they are fixed on a path that was determined by Shakespeare, that neither the characters, the audience, nor Stoppard himself can change.
Two techniques, three if you're fast
-Imagery: unlike Shakespeare, Stoppard does not need imagery and description to populate his bleak world,
-Soliloquy: used in Hamlet to reveal inner workings of a character's mind, Ros and Guil are not important enough to use soliloquies, neither are they ever alone

Also look at the way your view of the original text has been transformed. Originally, when reading the parent text, Hamlet, we are positioned to see Ros and Guil as traitorous, manipulative characters who want nothing more than to impress the King and Queen. In RAGAD, Stoppard transforms them into two characters that are merely hapless pawns, easily manipulated by those around them. Consider the way you now look at the language of Shakespeare. During RAGAD, Ros and the Player often indirectly comment on the play Hamlet itself. For example, at one point Ros hears Hamlet say, "Oh, I could be bounded in a nutshell!" (or whatever the quote is) and exclaims "He's depressed! Denmark's a prison and he'd rather live in a nutshell." This enables the audience to look at Hamlet in a new light. We take some of the phrases, the characters and even the plot itself in a more light-hearted view.
Genius!! Very sophisticated! This is helpful, however I have most what you said in my essay, already. I feel relieved in that I was going to do what you suggested already, I have all my ideas and context... etc down, I just need to make it into an essay.... could you look at it, it would benefit you too, maybe, you seem to know alot already.
 

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Sure, if you'd like. I don't know how much help I'd be but I can give you some suggestions if I take a look at it. I'll PM you my email address, just give me the go ahead.
 

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Sam. said:
Sure, if you'd like. I don't know how much help I'd be but I can give you some suggestions if I take a look at it. I'll PM you my email address, just give me the go ahead.
Please do, go ahead. :)
 

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