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so i have a assignment which i received in week 8 of school so basically i have to write an essay and link it to a statement which was given in the assignment if anyone would like to help me read over it and give me some pointers please leave your e-mails behind and i will add you and give you more detail about the essay.
 

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so i have a assignment which i received in week 8 of school so basically i have to write an essay and link it to a statement which was given in the assignment if anyone would like to help me read over it and give me some pointers please leave your e-mails behind and i will add you and give you more detail about the essay.
ill read it tonight

j-uhrig@hotmail.com
 

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Good to see annagurl learning from her little forumspring incident :p
 

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I'm willing to accept anyone as my facebook friend if they're bothered finding me. This is a challenge to all the bos lurkers out there. Find me, bitches >:]
Challenge Accepted!!!

Is your name Anna by the way
 

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so i have a assignment which i received in week 8 of school so basically i have to write an essay and link it to a statement which was given in the assignment if anyone would like to help me read over it and give me some pointers please leave your e-mails behind and i will add you and give you more detail about the essay.
Absolutely no way. You post here asking for help in one long winded, grammatically incorrect sentence with no uppercase of nouns or sentence structure. No offense but you deserve to fail for that.
 

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Absolutely no way. You post here asking for help in one long winded, grammatically incorrect sentence with no uppercase of nouns or sentence structure. No offense but you deserve to fail for that.
Maybe OP chose this particular format the emphasise to us the severity of how much he needs our assistance. The use of enjambment creates a relentless, constant rhythm that compels the audience to believe that his situation is tiring. Due to the lack of punctuation, the OP is able to emphasise to us that his issue does not end and will not subside unless we help him.
...I think.
 

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found it

i could post a link if u want ....lol
 

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