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bobthebuilder94
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the question itself was hard....like because this is what i thought it said to explore:
connections to place influence perceptions of belonging belonging
I logic'd it to be a one way relationship, and you couldn't explore backwards, and because it said place...i didn't include society, because place=nature and stuff like that....so idk,, if you could include society, i wish i could redo this essay haha
I'D LIKE TO PUT A DICK-IN-bos, srsly soo hard to mould it around dickison, IS IT BAD I ONLY DID 2 POEMS AND A RELATED??? but managed 5 pages? i did This is my letter to the world, and I was hungry all the years................FORGOT TO PUT THAT STUPID AS BERRY OF A MOUNTAIN BUSH QUOTE, SO PISSED AFTER THAT EXAM
connections to place influence perceptions of belonging belonging
I logic'd it to be a one way relationship, and you couldn't explore backwards, and because it said place...i didn't include society, because place=nature and stuff like that....so idk,, if you could include society, i wish i could redo this essay haha
I'D LIKE TO PUT A DICK-IN-bos, srsly soo hard to mould it around dickison, IS IT BAD I ONLY DID 2 POEMS AND A RELATED??? but managed 5 pages? i did This is my letter to the world, and I was hungry all the years................FORGOT TO PUT THAT STUPID AS BERRY OF A MOUNTAIN BUSH QUOTE, SO PISSED AFTER THAT EXAM
_deloso
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lol yeah it is oodgeroo. "We are going" lol is that yours as well? It fitted in quite perfectly!
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my prepared essay was all about place
gg people who told me that I'll do shit with a prepared essay
gg people who told me that I'll do shit with a prepared essay
_deloso
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connection with a place allows one to perceive or experience a sense of belonging. Lack of connection negates it.
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Omg yeeeeeeees!!! It was amazing
Yes. You'd lose 2/5 or so marks, because you didn't conclude, and didn't stay in the essay text type (no conclusion). You don't have a shot at a b6 for that response. Should have stopped writing and finished it.Would i lose a few marks if i didn't finish? I got half way through my last paragraph on RT and didn't write a conclusion
You would, because you argument is not finished... Bad luck :\Would i lose a few marks if i didn't finish? I got half way through my last paragraph on RT and didn't write a conclusion
Why not just use two?
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Logically yes, but the marker 'could' see merit in your essay and not mark you down as harshly.Would i lose a few marks if i didn't finish? I got half way through my last paragraph on RT and didn't write a conclusion
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ye should've written a conclusionWould i lose a few marks if i didn't finish? I got half way through my last paragraph on RT and didn't write a conclusion
it's okay though, it kind of depends. how many related texts did you write on? if only one and it's not substantial enough, you'd lose even more marks.
also depends on initial sophistication of course
lol... it said you had to use "at least ONE related". You could have used 2
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sorry to sound harsh, but yes you would.Would i lose a few marks if i didn't finish? I got half way through my last paragraph on RT and didn't write a conclusion
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It said "at least ONE other related text of your own choosing", so you could of used two or three etc.
Ah shit, i only did one but it did fit quite well with place as my 2nd had nothing to do with place.ye should've written a conclusion
it's okay though, it kind of depends. how many related texts did you write on? if only one and it's not substantial enough, you'd lose even more marks.
also depends on initial sophistication of course
How many marks are we talking here 2 - 3 maybe?