Section 2 - Creative Writing (2 Viewers)

[NWO]

And sht i wrote it in the wrong section. The guy changed it after. I wont get a 0??

 

[twinklegal19]

Damn that speech was tough

 

[Ali95]

I liked the creative, I didn't intend to use one of my practise responses but the third quote fit it so well that I did.

I did directly quote the quote though (instead of just basing the idea around it), hope I don't lose marks for that. :/ Also ended up writing in second person.

Same here, I both included it directly, and also made a point of alluding to it wherever I could. Anyway, not going to worry too much about it now, what's done is done.

 

[Locus]

Wait, i saw the picture but was the main part of the image. I thought you could use any part of the image ...

 

[NWO]

Well u could but the most salient image if the photo.. .At first i didnt even notice the pitcutre there lol. I looked at the fk quotes all set during day time bringht sun light, no snow no christmas. Nek nemit. i Looked at the picture, which was part of my creative anway which acted as a trigger for the flashback

 

[twinklegal19]

Did anyone use the 3rd stimulus?

 

[Locus]

lol ... i was going to use the picture but then i thought it had to be of her mom or something. That changed my story too much so i kept with the chair and the folder(homework) idea. So instead of working like a good girl, she flipped her chair and pretended to have a tank fight. This led like a chain reaction to her hanging with her friends instead of studying.

 

[Marc26]

Damn that speech was tough

Everyone got trolled and prepped the wrong thing. Strong troll.

 

[ns23q]

Whats the situation if you only used a small element of the picture?
i.e. i only used the bucket down the bottom which had horses on it?
Does this matter or they want you to use the WHOLE image?

 

[moocow920]

Would it have been ok to talk about the picture of the woman within the stool photo as if the photo frame was of someone's family member? like change it a little bit?

 

[NWO]

lol u dont have to write about an actresss at all. I doubt anyone did. I wrote it was this grandfather's daughter

 

[yasminee96]

Did anyone use the 3rd stimulus?

Yah, I did

 

[NWO]

lol no? the pircture of a girl or lady doesnt matter who lol. They wont make it that harshly lol if not i hope 15/15 nek nemit 8/15...

 

[NWO]

OFC lol

 

[procrastinator2]

I didn't like the stimulus the 1st and 3rd pretty much had the same ideas about the sun and journeys blah blah blah I prepped for a story and managed to adapt the 1st stimulus in about 2 times hopefully they are lenient markers

 

[NWO]

wat u on about lol. what bucket with horses? The item or the picture had to be kinda central. IDK. i wrote this guy lookking at the picture and he thinks of his past how his little girl admired him. well not anymore.

 

[lifeinmydalek]

My creative fit perfectly, I don't think I've ever been so happy with an English paper!

 

[Webbi]

I wrote a gothic story, don't ask me how, it's just my natural, writing genre, and I loved it! I managed to write 5 pages in 30mins. Hell yeah

 

[NWO]

fk is it ok if i mentioned the picture once? Like i wrote like 8 lines about it. Then i talked about the flashback of the girl instead.

 

[hjed]

Did anyone use the 3rd stimulus?

Yes, did you use second person?