How many quotes are you doing for AOS essay? (1 Viewer)

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I think I used to go: topic 1: text 1 then text 2... topic 2: text 1 then text 2. In separate paragraphs.
Okay, thanks. That's what I usually do but then one of my essays was marked by a different teacher for Trials (AOS essay) and she told me to break it up more so it wasn't just a 'wall of text'. But my teacher always says it is fine?
 

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I was told 3-4 quotes per paragraph was the minimum.



And English teachers prefer shorter quotes.
Yeah can't believe I didn't try using shorter quotes earlier, it makes it so much easier to write an essay and started doing better.
 

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I'm memorising 16 quotes, but I'm only using 12 quotes in my essay
 

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I'm memorising 16 quotes, but I'm only using 12 quotes in my essay
Are you confident you can answer all rubric points effectively with 16 quotes? I got like 15 or so and they answer like 2 rubric points lol
 

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Are you confident you can answer all rubric points effectively with 16 quotes? I got like 15 or so and they answer like 2 rubric points lol
If you used broad enough quotes and themes you should be able to spin them to apply to multiple points in the syllabus.
 

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Are you confident you can answer all rubric points effectively with 16 quotes? I got like 15 or so and they answer like 2 rubric points lol
Ive mainly set myself up for confronting discoveries and transformations as a result of discoveries, but I've memorised in case they ask something about attitudes to discovery
 

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