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  • "my teacher said that they're not really too fussed if it connects to the stimulus THAT much because the main reason they provide stimulus is just to 'stimulate' us, they're not trying to catch us out sort of thing."

    stimulate ay

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    raniaaaaaaaaaaa, from my teacher :D:


    Your creative:
    was very good, very nicely edited and good of you to reveal edward's inclination to make sense of the world and his place in it at the end.... im not going to give you a mark without a criteria as a point of reference, but i would say this is a band 5, possibly 6, depending on whether you incorporate the stimuli offered and respond to the question (i.e. the trials to asked for a story that demonstrated consequences of belonging, most people ignored the consequence part and just did a belonging generic story).

    your essay:
    is a band 6.... actually, without a conclusion and incomplete, the most you could get is a band 4, so PLEASE, im telling you band 6 on the assumption that you will HAVE a conclusion in place. If not, write a good one that is on par with your essay.
    Overwhelming features of an individual often lie in the path of the road to developing a true sense of belonging. To what extent is this true? Discuss with reference to Ninor's glamorous looks.


    srsly

    As you grow, you develop the ideal of where your true belonging could be - the place, the home, the partner, and the work. You seldom achieve all the elements of the ideal, but it travels with you as the criterion and standard of what true belonging could be.
    Use this quote as a basis of an exploration of the concept of belonging.
    key thing, link EVERY paragraph back to the question

    make links where possible

    dw, miss 20/20 bladerunner

    you'll do excellent

    SENSE OF SELF PLEASE BOS

    :eek:
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