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  1. chandelier

    4U English + Ext History?

    I did Extension History, 4U English and Society and Culture, so yeah, like ujuphleg I also had 3 major works. It CAN be very stressful at times, and unless you manage your time well then most likely one of your works will suffer. However, I really don't think that ext. history is as hard as...
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    Fight Club

    Yay!!!! finished! My 'nihilsitic visons' in all its glory. Since my work is directed at an audience who are familiar with Palahniuk's work I though it would be appropiate if I posted it here instead of the exten. 2 forum. Unfortunatley, I'm not too comfortable presenting my work publicly (yes...
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    Fight Club

    In order, Fight Club then Survivor +Invisible Monsters (Can't decide), Lullaby, and then Choke which was a little more exitentailist than his others, but wasn't as good. I would say that Fight Club the movie is one of the very few rare cases were it holds its own and is just as good as the...
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    story names

    Mine is called Glass, Death and Porcelian. I usually suck at titles, but it was one of the first things I came up with and it's pretty significant to the whole overall effect of the story. Mine's a 3 part story and each seperate story uses imagery from the seperate bits of the title, and it...
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    Whats ur short story about?

    Chinese people are alot like the Jewish. Maybe, the Chinese person finds out she's German-Jewish, and her grandfather's Hitler, or Satan. Oh, and she likes Cheese.
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    Whats ur short story about?

    Chinese people are alot like the Jewish. Hey, maybe this Chinese person is German-Jewish, and her Grandfather's Hitler, or Satan. Oh, and she likes Cheese.
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    Stupid stuff you've written?

    That’s quite… interesting…I guess it goes to show that only a guy would be able to write like that We haven’t done any sort of writing exercises, that might have something to do with the fact that we don’t have classes, I’ve been counting and I would say all in all I’ve met with my teacher 3...
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    What are you doing ur PIP on?

    Btw, my PIP is on wether or not the so-called liberated women in movies are really empowered. SOunds lame and cliched i know, but i'm not really aiming for anything groundbreaking, just need to get the stupid thing done. Picked my topic two weeks ago, have written 200 words.
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    What are you doing ur PIP on?

    I love the Sex Pistols. I know this doesn't relate, I'm just running out of ways to procrastinate. I lack imagination.
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    How much study these holidays?

    Wow. That's all I can say really, I'm thinking I must be realy unambitious or you guys are jsut crazy. 8 hours? i was planning on 3/4....and that includes my three major works and 2 assesments. Realistically, I didn't think I'd get much studying for the trials at all....which starts two weeks...
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    [Official Critique Thread]

    Hey Kids, I've finished my story (well, i guess it's a draft, but i like to think i've finsihed) I can't post it up yet, but I would really appreciate some feedback.....so email or pm me and I'll send you my story.... Well at least this way I can differentiate between ppl who are actaully...
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    [Official Critique Thread]

    With 1Time4thePpl's story, i thought it was very intersting. Your story is complex, which the markers are looking for apparently, it's also different from the other work i've been reading (in a good way). My only criticism is that you might have too many charecters, i don't know if it's just me...
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    [Official Critique Thread]

    With Llyrai's story, i found the writing to be really good, i agree and think you have problems with typos and mixing up past/present/future tenses (unless that's part of ur whole post-modern thing?) The concept, i think, is cliche - but u pulled it off well. And also, this could be just me...
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    [Official Critique Thread]

    Open the envelope, Overall I had to say it was pretty good, really nice concept and I liked the killer’s motivation. Sometimes the writing is good, and other times it’s a bit awkward.…I’ve included more specific comments below. "See you at The Ballroom tonight Scarlet. It will be a very...
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