anyone here an expert english advanceee year 11 going to twelver?? (2 Viewers)

[wandering17]

Hii guyss,

i know year twelvers are busy so can't ask them, but any pro year 11 english ppl here that can review my creative writing piece, in terms of tense changes?

Thanksssss would be appreciated,

 

[LizzyGrant]

I think you should say gg

 

[seventhroot]

yeah I am pretty pro at english.

 

[wandering17]

I think you should say gg

why

 

[wandering17]

yeah I am pretty pro at english.

So are you implying i can send you my creative writing? orr naah.

 

[seventhroot]

So are you implying i can send you my creative writing? orr naah.

if you want? might read it on the weekend or during a lecture if I am bored

 

[wandering17]

if you want? might read it on the weekend or during a lecture if I am bored

i sorta need it refined by tomorrow last minute holiday hw. >.> it's okay if you can't .

 

[seventhroot]

i sorta need it refined by tomorrow last minute holiday hw. >.> it's okay if you can't .

yeah then I can't

if it's homework; just submit whatever. should be good

 

[wandering17]

yeah then I can't

if it's homework; just submit whatever. should be good

ohkay no worries thanks anyways, just wanted to make a good impression going into year 12... :/

 

[LizzyGrant]

ohkay no worries thanks anyways, just wanted to make a good impression going into year 12... :/

lol

 

[seventhroot]

ohkay no worries thanks anyways, just wanted to make a good impression going into year 12... :/

lol

lel

not sure if srs or asian

 

[LizzyGrant]

lel

not sure if srs or asian

Probably asian

 

[Fiction]

yeah then I can't

if it's homework; just submit whatever. should be good

Just in response to seventhroot, homework pieces are usually considered drafts - your first draft doesn't have to be amazing. Most of the model responses you ever will get are well into 5th, 6th drafts etc. Cut yourself some slack C:

 

[wandering17]

Probably asian

confirm not asian. Just take importance in every work i submit :/