Can anyone please read my reflection and give me some feedback if possible, I would really appreciate it (1 Viewer)

[SB257426]

This is my reflection statement to my mod C creative. Tell me if you would like to read the creative as well

 

[user18181818]

hey i'm definitely no expert but ur reflection seems really good, you have a lot of techniques and reference the prescribed texts really well.
the only recommendation i have is for this statement 'The implication of sensory language, including both visual and auditory descriptions such as “the distant hooting of an owl” and the “leather boots delicately crunching against the powdery snow” aids in the advancement of my plot', you haven't actually said what your plot is about so maybe make that more explicit.
if you want u can send ur imaginative so i have a better understanding of what you're trynna say

 

[SB257426]

hey i'm definitely no expert but ur reflection seems really good, you have a lot of techniques and reference the prescribed texts really well.
the only recommendation i have is for this statement 'The implication of sensory language, including both visual and auditory descriptions such as “the distant hooting of an owl” and the “leather boots delicately crunching against the powdery snow” aids in the advancement of my plot', you haven't actually said what your plot is about so maybe make that more explicit.
if you want u can send ur imaginative so i have a better understanding of what you're trynna say

Thank you for your feedback !!!

Yep, ill send the imaginative over

 

[SB257426]

hey i'm definitely no expert but ur reflection seems really good, you have a lot of techniques and reference the prescribed texts really well.
the only recommendation i have is for this statement 'The implication of sensory language, including both visual and auditory descriptions such as “the distant hooting of an owl” and the “leather boots delicately crunching against the powdery snow” aids in the advancement of my plot', you haven't actually said what your plot is about so maybe make that more explicit.
if you want u can send ur imaginative so i have a better understanding of what you're trynna say

here u go

 

[user18181818]

here u go

wow you are extremely smart this is a great imaginative

 

[SB257426]

wow you are extremely smart this is a great imaginative

Thank you so much !!!!

(My english teacher hated it _

 

[elmio023]

Thank you so much !!!!

(My english teacher hated it _

If you're really doing English standard, than that story is better than like 90% of advanced stories so nice work.