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Yeah i would use 'should be'.

I think arguing for a compromise would just end up being a discussion, so i'm probably going to argue for environmental protection, with an added disclaimer that though it is important, it should be noted that economic growth is naturally a significant factor.
 

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I'm pretty sure my essay's missing the point, but I've got too much to do to change it
 

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Like not entirely/properly answering the question? Cause it's the same for me. I still don't fully understand what is meant by 'critically analyse'. *shrug*
 

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I don't think I really talk about why one is more important than the other enough

Did you define the financial crisis?
 

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No, i didn't define it. I think that would require too many words. But i do plan on defining economic growth, i just need to find a credible source first.
 

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hey, umm stupid question but how many words, on average, do you have in a paragraph? Cause i think mine might be a bit long...
 

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done 1111 words, and made it more relevant :)
just need to do my argument re current financial crisis
i forgot about the need for a synopsis, which angers me
 

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Whoa, you rewrote 1111 words?! That's commitment! I don't think i have the patience to make mine anymore relevant, it involves too much work! LOL
Never written a synopsis/abstract before, so i'm not looking forward to that too much. Still gotta do a conclusion now..
 

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na didn't rewrite, that's just where i was up to. just rejigged a few sentences
just doing conclusion as well :)
 

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Ohh well that's even better then.
Slowly, oh so slowly getting there!
 

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editing, adding, fixing, referencing and abstracting =_=

olivegreentiger: whoo! congrats!!
 

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yay done
~1600 words
still need to read over it, but got to get up at 6.15 though, so bed's more important
 
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thank you :) i still don't get why we had to do a synopsis. pretty much the same as your conclusion. ah welll. good luck everyone!
 

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I completely agree! It has everything: the topic of your discussion, your arguments and your conclusion... stupid... lol

Good luck to the both of you!

***BTW, hope someone can answer this before 4:30pm tomorrow LOL, but is there a 10% leeway for the word count? I assumed there was but now i'm not too sure ><
 
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I assume there is the leeway
The synopsis is not included in the 1,500 words (just in case that was the problem!)
 

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Thanks for replying! Mine was JUST below the leeway, phew!
Anyway...IT'S FINALLY DONE. sheeesh!
 

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