It should be fine. I think if you wrote about the audience and mentioned one or two "my" or "I" then you should be fine. I think its only one mark though.WAS IT NECESSARY TO WRITE IN FIRST PERSON OMG because I just said "one's insight onksjafdajfsjbdfkj can be shaped by a comparative study of these texts"
I talked about the ambitions of:you had to talk about context, BR + Frankenstein's context is the emphasis in the module, so you should be okay. Would have been more ideal to mention the ambition of Tyrell and Victor and compare those.
I think you nailed it by extending the concept of ambition to the authors too. Not many people in the state would have thought to do that, imo. Well done.I talked about the ambitions of:
> Creature/Roy (I said The Creature's ambition was to get a partner, but then his ambition became to destroy Victor's life...I just bullshitted that part, I don't even know why I said that)
Bro, you're words are such a confidence-booster...thanks.I think you nailed it by extending the concept of ambition to the authors too. Not many people in the state would have thought to do that, imo. Well done.
Awesomesauce. Thanks!! If you did that and more (I got a decent 6 pages out of it), I'm sure you killed it!@coreyman210_
That was just two of my paragraphs...that was my problem! I felt like that's what the question asked, but I also felt it wasn't enough > hence my OP
I don't reckon you would FAIL the essay....I dunno what it'll do....I was just so freaked out because of my teacher, all I did in my essays today was keep using the words of the question...even when I had no idea what I was writing (because in the trials, I got 15/20 in an essay that I felt I had aced, so this time I made sure I didn't do it)@MrHippopotamus yeah that was the same with my teacher but I just spent so much time on just making sure I had all my quotes and everything that I completely overlooked that and now I'm worried that it's gonna ruin my HSC. Like would it be detrimental to my mark and could I fail that essay even if I answered the question and just used words that meant the same as ambition?
It's never necessary to write an essay in first person. You can give a personalised response in third person.WAS IT NECESSARY TO WRITE IN FIRST PERSON OMG because I just said "one's insight onksjafdajfsjbdfkj can be shaped by a comparative study of these texts"
It was very difficult (IMO) to FAIL an essay....Okay thanks. I know before I wouldn't use the exact words from the question but would answer it and get a good mark for it. But because this is the HSC I just want to know that it won't make me fail the essay entirely. Because I know that I answered the question. Thankyou, I tend to stress over everything so sorry to bug you.
Maybe both of you are just very talented.It was very difficult (IMO) to FAIL an essay....
In my trials, I wrote 2.5 paragraphs and got5 12/20....my friend wrote ONE PARAGRAPH! he got 10/20....and he does standard!
Point: You are NOT going to fail. Go to bed. Actually, don't-study for MATHS (if that's your next exam)...
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/130/3/a/oh_stop_it_you____by_citromosfagyi-d64reaj.pngMaybe both of you are just very talented.
Wow.Ok. That puts me at ease a little. Thanks and aha nah it's not I dropped that.
Also, stop with the propoganda. Sneaky.Point: You are NOT going to fail. Go to bed. Actually, don't-study for MATHS (if that's your next exam)...