General Thoughts: English Paper 1 (AOS) (2 Viewers)

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Guys, I found the comprehension questions were too complex for the amount of time needed for them. I was really happy with my essay as I prepared an essay for THAT question and my creative fitted perfectly.

I missed out on the 5 marker in comprehension.. Someone console me hahaha
 

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Essay structure all over the place but I wrote anything that I had studied! Section I was actually the best of them all.
 

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It was hard but I am sure everyone did okay! Well that's what I keep telling my self.....HAHAHA
 

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It wasn't that bad, but....I FREAKING RAN OUT OF TIME!

Insta-lost 5 marks cuz I didn't get time to do q5 of short answers TT^TT


My story was about a bookworm whose only friends were books, so I used the circle of friends and likened the books to them ahahahha.
 

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Also a father and son. I only recall that because that is what I used, haha.

Overall though, a pretty guuuud paper.
LOL the dude looked kinda old to be a Dad, so I assumed it was his Grandpa. But doesn't matter, my story was based on a story about a guy and his grandpa anyways :p, so yea fitted perfectly :)
 

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Sweet, I linked ones place in society, court vs pastoralism, ones relationships with others, etc, and said how time affected them and how one viewed it. Great to hear! :D
Mate, 'English Advanced (83)'? Really? REALLY? Inb4 90+
 

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I loved the creative writing section! :) Ugh short answers held me back on time (def lost the 5 mark quesion) but I managed to do both section 2 and 3 to a good length in an hour
 

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I was just happy that there was no retarded shit. E.g. Feature article or two related text (x

The paper was okay! Section I was a bit confusing. lul

WHAT TECHNIQUE WAS USED FOR THE POEM?! WTF

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Mate, 'English Advanced (83)'? Really? REALLY? Inb4 90+
Everyone keeps saying that, and I really do hope 90+, haha! What's your aim? :)

Also, I'm hoping for modules to hit 17/20 - A, 18/20 - B and 17/20 - C. Would be a good mark to hit 85+/105.
 

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Short answers were a little difficult, but I guess overall it wasn't the worst paper we could have got :\ That being said, still a fair bit hard than most of the others I've seen. They wanted to you deal with multiple things at once.
 

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LOL the dude looked kinda old to be a Dad, so I assumed it was his Grandpa. But doesn't matter, my story was based on a story about a guy and his grandpa anyways :p, so yea fitted perfectly :)
Ah dear. I suppose I should have picked up on that, hahahaha. Good on you though!
 

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I missed out on the 5 marker in comprehension.. Someone console me hahaha
I asked some people in my class and they weren't able to finish it either, so that made me feel a little better hehe...
I'm just worried my essay was too basic/not analytic enough
 

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creative was probably best, part one questions weren't so bad either. the essay was a meaningless mess, probably the worst i've done...
 

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Who else is just glad we're one paper down :D
 

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Thank fuck the question had 'interactions' in it.

Insert generic essay about family, community, and place...
bs some shite about time.
 

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It was overall a decent paper.

I did creative first, used the grandpa and grandson fishing stimulus-35 mins
Shorts answers I spent too long on-Almost 50 mins
Which means I had to rush my essay unfortunately, but I still wrote two full booklets.

OVERALL: I think I did better in trials, just happy it's over. It was fine.
 

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I don't know haha- I was a bit iffy on this time concept. I think my essay turned out alright though it was only like 1000 words, my creative was good but I'm not sure that I made the stimulus the central idea and short answers idk. We'll see I guess
 

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